Tuesday, June 10, 2008

अब...

अब ना जिस्म हूं ....ना एहसास हूँ...
मृग तृष्णा हूँ.. प्यास हूँ..
शाम का बूझा दिया... उजाले की तलाश हूँ...
देखो, तो कही नहीं....ढूंढो तो आस पास हूँ..!!

मैं........

8 comments:

manas bharadwaj said...

main bahut kam blogs par comment karta hoon

par aabke blog par kar raha hoon
kyonki mujhe aapki panktiyan bahut pasand aayi hain ...........gajab likha hai janaab apne

main orkut par

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BYE AND HAVE A NICE TIME

रश्मि प्रभा... said...

कम शब्दों में भावनाओं को
सार्थक कर दिया........तुम्हारे लिखने का अंदाजे-बयान
काफी भावपूर्ण है...........

bhawana said...

4 panktiyon mei itni badi baat kah di ...aapki lekhani ka jawaab nahi....

!!अक्षय-मन!! said...

nishabd kuch shabd hi nahi bhaiyya pata nahi kis pal likha hoga aapne
apne dil par apne jazbaton ko....

Anonymous said...

Beautiful. kuch kehne ko chora hi nahi.........

Unknown said...

Nice One
there are a few people who have dare to write something and quality to write something that touch your soul and you are among them. Keep Writing and enjoy each and every moment of ur life

Anonymous said...

bahut hi pyari si choti si kavita..
kam shabadon mein gehri baat keh di aapne....

Meri Nayi Kavita par aapke Comments ka intzar rahega.....

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विजय वर्धन said...

कभी कभी कोई कोई वाक्य बहुत कम शब्दों में असीमित बयां कर जाते हैं